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.:Golden Pearl Oc Drawing:. by SleepyStaceyArt .:Golden Pearl Oc Drawing:. by SleepyStaceyArt
Adopted her from CupcakeForMyKitten

I think this turned out ok...?

Well, it was better than I thought it would... :")
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:iconturon-chan:
I love the improvements you've made so far that I have seen in all of your works. In viewing your profile, you haven't posted a lot of colored traditional art.
The lines in your just outline without color traditional art could use improvement, and that comes with time.
In the works I seem, correct me if I'm wrong, to not find a description of your character. It would be a benefit for you to have a personality behind the character to emphasize that it is an original, not just another pearl "gemsona" and you can improve that by focusing on what she would be in real life. Not just specific likes and dislikes, characters interacting together.
Take more time in your proportions and it will help immensely when it comes to the outline.
Picture what personality your character has and what body type would accommodate that, because it helps a lot. To improve the stiffness in the shoulders, draw the joints beforehand, make sure they're circular.
Outlining in traditional art takes time to make it perfect, but I see you're improving so keep up the good work!
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:iconcupcakeformykitten:
CupcakeForMyKitten Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She looks super cute!! I like the shading and the highlights!
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SleepyStaceyArt Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Aaa tysm ;w;;;;;;
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:iconenderdurant:
EnderDurant Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so pretty!!
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SleepyStaceyArt Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
tysm!!! ;w;;;;;;
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popinat Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017  Student General Artist
she's very pretty!
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SleepyStaceyArt Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
tysm ;w;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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April 9, 2017
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